MaxR's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[My First Flash Animations]

Don't give up!

This is a start. I see that you were experimenting with some effects and voice overs, but I know that you'll learn how to improve, eventually!

Aqlex responds:

And I have! I didn't give up xD

[Geno x Dedede]

Good Start

You made a good use of the flash effects and it looks like it's starting to work. The ending was okay, it wasn't so dramatic, perhaps have the classic "pick your ending" choice at the end instead of a draw. Although there's no plot or story necessary for a good sprite animation fight, having something that draws people into the characters can add to the flash movie.
Keep up the good work!

wizzzi responds:

yeah i thinking to put "pick your ending" but for me the best is the classic too draw xD

tanks,and thanks for review

[MK vs. SF]

dang!

This is the best sprite movie I've seen. I mean it is that best kind of sprite movie that is so enjoyable, quick paced fighting, instead of story story story. I like sprite movies that concentrate on intense action instead of anything else really. I liked how you worked the background and made your own sprites (if you did). You picked the right song and synced the fighting correctly. You are on my favorite movie, but I am suspecious that you have no profile, this is your first movie, it took you two weeks, you don't respond to reviews, to be suspecious, not because one of them you do, but because all of them it is. This movie is underrated when it came out, as you can see, it got a daily second. But now the score is 4.22, and I'm sure it would get a weekly award if this keeps up.

Proxicide responds:

Hey, thanks for the compliment. It would be daunting to reply to every post (there's over 400), but I do carefully read each one and gauge the level of interest of the reviewer, and what he likes or dislikes (so that I can improve on the next one). I really appreciate the feedback. I might throw in my profile later on if people are that curious.

[FFVI:The Time Before P-5]

it was okay

except the fact that you submitted this same movie and changed it to that 'somewhere I belong Trailer'. The text was pretty long, voices would be good, but at the same time, worsen. The battles were okay, I mean sprites are pretty limited unless you make your own. Also I noticed that you co-authored 2 random guys that I don't recall being co-authored for this same movie yesturday. I got my eyes on you.

DanyLaporte responds:

hehe!! pretty wierd review lol!! but I like it!! First, yes, this movies was sent yesterday.....but it had major problem so i had to fix it...and I didnt want it to get a damn pretty low score...So I cahnged it for a old movie.... Yes, yesterday when I sent the video, I had forgot to put the to co-authors name...but I cahnged it after like 5minutes.... Lol!! ( i got my eyes on you )!!!

[Majin Vegetto: Episode 3]

Improving!

You sure are improving fast, I mean it wasn't too long ago since you submitted episode 1 of this series. Nice, you finally added real voices instead of recorded ones and subtitles. I see you gave co-author credit to your voice actors, that's really nice, and I hope you will get an award to encourage you for your next episode. Vegetto's voice is very nice, your voice actor of Goku and Vegeto did a good job timing it correctly. I have one problem with the voices though, Gohan's voice did not match, it was too soft and wasn't deep enough, that's why he didn't get the co-author credit huh? Nice preloader, with Vegetto charging up. Your animations to have greatly improve, and I noticed some FBF, like when Vegetto was turning around. Its always good to have FBF, keep practicing and you might master it eventually. Everyone was nicely drawn except that kid's name, uh I forgot his name, Goten? His face was right, but when you moved his eyes he looked quite funny, maybe make his eyes move faster in lesser frames. It looked like he was looking something moving by slowly. Anyways, good movie, it was a lil bit short but sometimes quality is better than quantity.

Majin-Ryan responds:

Thanks man:D im really glad you liked it, the voice actor for Gohan hasnt got his name on the co-authors cause i forgot to ask him for his ng alias:/ sorry, but thanks for the review:D

[Majin Vegetto: Episode 1]

it was okay

it wasn't as good as DBZ: is that okay? Your characters were distorted most of the time and sound quality was low, you should raise to have the exact sound quality from the show! And when gohan turned mystik, you used his kid scream not his adult! Man that sounded funny. It would have been great if you fixed the proportion and have better sound quality.

Majin-Ryan responds:

Thanks for the reivew, i actually used the power up for Gohan from when he fights Brolly when he was older:S, you can't really tell though lol

[Basic Flash Concepts]

a tutorial with voices

Wow, a tutorial with voices, but was it for the better or worst? You actually have the layout for your next episode lol, wouldn't it be better for the audience if you actually finished that. You should have re-recorded some lines, but oh well it gave that feeling as though you were guiding through it live! Overall the tutorial you have made are either known to people already, or some people never use them. Oh well....

luminousnerd responds:

Yea, I'm gonna come out with more, better ones pretty quick here