MaxR's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[With You]

lost your password?

If he lost his NG password, couldnt he go to the thing where you type your e-mail to get your password back! They will send you an e-mail of your password. Anyways its not right to resubmmited something, even though its long lost.

It's an okay choice of music, considering it was loud, to cover up the no sound effects (I know its hard to find right sound effects). Its cool to cover up random animations with a music video. Better luck next time.

deawdawea responds:

You're a little right. But I just wanted to have this movie on my account.

:/

And I forgot the password of my email too.
So that's why I resubmitted it. ;)

[Noah - A Short Film]

lol. . .

Alright I watched the beginning and I thought it was suppost to be funny, then it turned weird. Oh the lines of your characters were grey, that's pretty nasty, it made it look like popped veins *shivers*. Alright the movie then turns serious? lol, the mood keeps swinging, the characters were nicely done, but I can't figure why this movie was called Noah just because he saw animals, zoo-animals. Next time, next movie I suggest humor isnt really your thing, seems like the anime-type.

Siard responds:

Thanks for your review. I will work on the lines next time:)

[Lambi 4]

Nice movie

That was an interesting movie, and very uniquely potrayed a hero that isn't all crazy and violent. Sure the music is kinda soft and looping, but I wonder why don't use other songs besides songs from flashkit. The graphics were nice, but could have looked even nicer if you took even more time on it, I see that you keep on improving and learning new techniques to potray your flash. I like how he learns new powers and how he becomes stronger and strong. Right, your movie is kinda babish but I can help you change all that, and bring the teenage group and up to watch your movie. No I'm not going to add violence and blood, but simply make it better, are you interested in letting me work with you? This is a kind of movie I would gladly work on if you would give me a chance. Please e-mail, aim message me, or even respond this review for your answer. Check my profile, right I only make sprite movies, but I've been practicing and even prooved it that I can draw and animate, if you want to check go to my movie Little Fighter Alpha Ch.7, go to the extras, and go to the "Warcraft III screenshots."

Enough if that, it's time to comment more on your movie, I've watched your other "Lambis" and seems like Lambi 4 has the least coolest boss, even though they were fighting in a "dreamworld", other Lambis had the ice man, the red robot who has the crystal ball of power (?), and the artist who gets controlled by some kind of bug in a hat and who makes a cool big robot. Lambi 4 was the best on everything from your other Lambis, except the main bad guy.

Oh also I wanted to tell you that your "Uploaded wrong! Lambi 3" you could of updated the dimensions, looks like you messed it up but you could have changed it the moment you saw and/or read the complains, I don't know I forgot maybe you have to pass Judgement to update your file.

Waiting for your long response?

Lambi responds:

take even more time on my graphics? Nah, I think I spent long enough on them.
I fiqured with the 'uploaded wrong' thing, that it would be better to re-upload it, because I didnt have many fans at the time, and most my views came form the couple of hours on the latest download side bar, so i uploaded it again to get all those views again.
No-ones ever offered to work on one of my flashes before. Theyre only things i do in my spare time, and i like it the way it is. What exactly did oyu want to do with it??

["Porcelain"]

come on man

I know how you have the perfect cheap combo, a good song, and an emotional movie. You put those two and obviously your animations werent as great, sure they were simple and "okay" but really a 4.01? That's too high just because you're a "famous" author on NG.

AsthmaticHamster responds:

I'm famous? Woah, didn't know that...

[LF2:A Hunter's Quest Ch.3]

Erm... okay.

This was okay. What made this a little boring was the shortness of fights. Your fights are obviously short because you want to concentrating on the story more, but you got to balance the story and fights. Also I see that your compression of your sprites are wrong, or maybe it's your music, but because of the size, you are not able to make your movies long and enjoyable. I likes how you made the setting of the city, the ring to the alley where Chase and Woody meets. Unfortunetly, it wasn't made correctly, as you can obviously see sprites cut in half. Your sprite characters also has flaqs, like black blobs on Woody's hair, perhaps you should take your time recutitng some of them, to give it a more "real" feeling. Overall you should start out simple and easy (hey that's how we all started), and maybe you should not rush your story, I know how tempting it is.

PyronX responds:

Thanks MaxR. Your words are very insightful, and I'll take them to heart. Thanks again and keep and doing what your doing

[Little Fighters 2 - Ep1]

Nope..

I still haven't found a LF movie better than mines, for one reason is to get better and interesting ideas. Wh at you did on this movie was so-so, beginner on sprites. You cut the sprites all wrong, making the file size HUGE (5mb) I mean you can notice the blur on the sprites. I liked the ideas you come up with, but improvements can back it up even more. The loading screen was plain and have to wait a loooooooooooong ass time (for 56k users) without having a loading bar, now how annoying is that. The fighting scenes are okay, and I know they're hard to make 'em long and interactive, becaus eyou have to coordinate all the characters, well atleast the ones that fight. You needed an intro for this story for people who never even played LF2. The ending of this movie seemed like the end of the series is coming, i mean you right away said "CAn they defeat Julian?" Shouldn't that be waaaaaaay later on. Hopefully you'll find out your further mistakes on this movie.
-MaxR of the LFA Series

TilTo responds:

Yeah, I know that I wrote can they defeat julian, but you don't know how they are going to get to julian, or if they even get to julian.. and I have no idea why the hell the sprites are blurring, I díd NOT blur them myself, when I copied the sprites they blurred themselfs. Maybe I just need to learn more flash :)

[NI`N JA]

lol

I think you got the idea of the Titanic song from Rise of MK 1 where Mario died. I liked the TimeSplitters 2 songs you used. And nice Review Crew pick award, because your reviewed your own movies and gave it a 10, don't think I don't know, accounts with a Link picture and you as favorite, and a 10!

ZyneXx responds:

How dare you acuse me of something like multiple acout reviewing dude! I have 1 acount and 1 acount only! Ever thought about it that some people are zelda fans too? And Btw ive got friend too you know...maybe they reviewd my movie as well?.......It almost sounds as if your jealous of my award. Wich I won fair and square.

[Newgrounds Man]

Yeah

I always wanted to make a music video, but I just never had the time for it. GJ it was pretty fun to watch, but it could have used some background color effects ( no, not the flashing lights kind that gives you seizure)

SeizureDog responds:

This movie was meant to look as simple as possible. So no BGs in this one ;)

[FF:The day after LD]

lol

Although I never watched any of HAcoreRD's movies, I may see why you hate him so much by watching this movie, it explains a lot. Good fighting scene, specially working with such few sprites and adding hand drawn effects. The menu needs work though and there are some bugs you need to fix, fix it and update your movie before it reaches 5k views!

Shin2k27 responds:

Gotta admit that i scrapped this menu badly, but i got a great design for the next movie. And id personally tell you to NOT watch any of HAcoreRD's movies if you dont want FF3 to look like crap to you. Btw cool serie but raise the fps. :)

[Sonic the Lost World]

Nope, sorry.

Sorry I didn't liked it, it was too slow, and kinda boring, not too much action and the plot made no sense, also you said LFACH5 was slow, bah, you know nothing man, LFACH5 was like 5 times faster than this, and full of action. I just got one word to describe this, Boring -_-

The sound and graphics were the pros. of this, very misterious songs, and the sprites were good, but the animation was very very bad.

Doom-Fox responds:

You're ridiculous, and lame, did you knew that kid? and yes, it's not as pro as my other work, since it was my 2nd flash movie of all time, but when the next ep cames in, you'll just shut your mouth.

I just hope you get out of immaturity.